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Wednesday, 15 June 2016

My chocolate family

Last week we learnt about metaphors. A metaphor is like an simile but you don't use "like" or "as", but you use "is" instead . We had to make a poem that describe's our families personality by using chocolates that suits them best. I hope you enjoy my poem.
 

3 comments:

  1. Hi Makere I like your metaphor story about your family because it describes how nice and sensitive your family is and can be.

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  2. Hello Makere this is a cool piece of metaphor writting

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  3. Hi Makere I like your metaphor story because it is a really good piece of writting that describes how sensitive your family can be.

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