I have been learning how to elaborate and add detail to my writing. The hard part was always using high level vocab to improve my writing. The good part is that I know how to elaborate my writing quite a bit so it helped me a lot. I can elaborate and add detail to my writing.
Thank you Whaea Verbina
ReplyDeleteKia ora Makere, My name is Tumanako and I go to Tautoro school.
ReplyDeleteyou have done a very good job with this project,once I had finished reading this I thought WOW, where can I do something like this. I like the part when you streach yourself and then go back up to the surface to take another deep breath. Maybe you could have put more stand out words in this just to make the reader feel like he/she is reading it.
keep it up.